Pratik Rimal

"The charm of mortal life, since her arrival has been joy, thoughts and longing of togetherness...a wish to be always behind her and protect her...maybe life after all gives us a second chance. And with your arrival, I now indeed believe that it sincerely does for our heavenly father cannot be heartless, as he instilled us with hearts of love, trust, faith, compassion and joy! .....

......Time tickles in joy and passes with a melancholic song. The hollow cry of penetrable sounds from the wild beasts underneath the moonlight alerts me of your hopeful
presence...and I am waiting..."

(extracted from: Stars Fall Down)



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Kathmandu, Nepal
Ever since I first started to write my first poem and article, I've loved to write. I continue to learn to write. In doing so, I let my feelings, thoughts, and emotions run wild and let people know what I intend to say, what I want to say. For me, writing is a creative expression to express what we never can say by speaking... Your readings and feedback are always important to me. Therefore, I wish that you'd write to me. My email address: pratik.rimal@hotmail.com Cell: +977-98511-42610

Monday, September 21, 2009

Moving ON …letting go a past with a story to tell

Time and tide waits for none, they say. Maybe this is what strengthens the notion of moving on despite the emotions that believes time has stopped!

Moving on…or letting go of a past is tiresome for many because underneath it hides our joy, togetherness and love. However, in it also lies pain and sorrow for life is full of experiences; the good and the bad. The former strengthens and helps us to move forward while the latter teaches us lessons that will further aid in our development.

Since the beginning, we’ve held on to the past and the hope of future is forlorn. Present is terrified of the gone days and petrified by the ensuing hours which slowly, but steadily changes to years! yet, the history ails us in a longing despite the joy or the pain as we, in every second of our breath wish to revive the past…correct the misfortunes and continue the joy!

We are reluctant to let go of the heydays and yet we have to for life moves on…sooner or later, we will have to accept and acknowledge the yellow light that will soon be replaced by a troublesome light of green! This is where we cannot stop despite our unwillingness…however, neither can we retrace our steps for there are hindrances which in euphoria were either ignored or forgotten!

Perfunctorily, we walk forward…wandering and wondering about the gone presence! Our hearts and minds continue to drift in memories while our feet travel a journey we never longed to walk alone…

In a flick of second, we recall, our life had turned topsy-turvy. The incident for a hiatus had successfully made our feelings desert us…the sojourn had seemed to take an eternity to reclaim joy…

However, a sea is never thirsty for it quenches the thirst of others, and yet, neither its depth nor its abundance fades. It continues to remain the same, reliving the past to eternity! Consequently, people continue to quench their thirst while the abundant sea continues to help them in their act…

Consequently, we, like the time move forward…no matter how reluctant we be for He knows best…we are His puppet and yet are allowed to choose our own destiny…even when we, despite our strong impulse fail to make one…

Thence, leaving the past, cherishing the moments, we move on…for a while, this journey maybe harsh but after sometime, it will be cherished because every chip and crack has its own story to tell…and although the folly of human minds with its ignorance tends to hinder destiny, it however is foretold…we thus, with a melancholic smile let go of the past and move ahead with a story to tell tomorrow!