Pratik Rimal

"The charm of mortal life, since her arrival has been joy, thoughts and longing of togetherness...a wish to be always behind her and protect her...maybe life after all gives us a second chance. And with your arrival, I now indeed believe that it sincerely does for our heavenly father cannot be heartless, as he instilled us with hearts of love, trust, faith, compassion and joy! .....

......Time tickles in joy and passes with a melancholic song. The hollow cry of penetrable sounds from the wild beasts underneath the moonlight alerts me of your hopeful
presence...and I am waiting..."

(extracted from: Stars Fall Down)



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Ever since I first started to write my first poem and article, I've loved to write. I continue to learn to write. In doing so, I let my feelings, thoughts, and emotions run wild and let people know what I intend to say, what I want to say. For me, writing is a creative expression to express what we never can say by speaking... Your readings and feedback are always important to me. Therefore, I wish that you'd write to me. My email address: pratik.rimal@hotmail.com Cell: +977-98511-42610

Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Illusionary Eyes …humbleness granted!

The humble features of a tiger should never be taken for granted. The nature’s meticulous craft of this stunning beauty is what lures people towards it. Covered in stripes and filled with its silent, gracious and tender moves, who would believe or acknowledge its might; strength and ferocious rage which sparkles in its eyes that we fail to notice?

But then it strikes! Yes; and it strikes with its mighty power! ROAR! Hear its rage and its strength! Sharp canines then tears apart the flesh and eats like a hungry beast. Who would have thought nature’s beauty would strike with huge force? Upon whose memory would have it stroke that the beauty would turn into a ferocious beast of mighty power hidden underneath its tender paws and mouth?

Now it occurs, underneath a beauty hides a beast that is patiently waiting to strike when the right time comes. Mesmerized by the beauty, the beast within easily surpasses the beholder’s eyes which sparkles brilliantly upon its gracious presence resembling a fairy!

The wait is over! Patience after all paid off. Then the fairy strikes. the fairy upon which we had looked with amusement changes its presumptuous existence turns to demon. Only then do we realize that what had amused us before had stroke without knowing that it had injected a slow poison stiffening our thoughts! Only then do we acknowledge that our eyes lie and everything we see and appreciate are overwhelming disillusions which we fail to realize until now!

Uproars of havoc is thus heard. Chaos starts. Screams of betrayal, agony and cries of help is heard. But alas! Help never comes. Prayers are never heard. The countless doors knocked for shelter never opens. Heaven turns into hell. The earth turns topsy-turvy.

And now that the cries have ended with every person’s last breath, the fairy then steps on the earth with her gracious presence, mesmerizing charm. She then pities human eyes of disillusion that for the last time stare not to her but to the far horizon of heavenly shelter that never sheltered its creations…

1 comment:

  1. dear pratik,
    i really admire your way of writing. you are such a poet! i just hope to read more from you! You are doing such great jobs! I love your works and i am falling into you!

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