Pratik Rimal

"The charm of mortal life, since her arrival has been joy, thoughts and longing of togetherness...a wish to be always behind her and protect her...maybe life after all gives us a second chance. And with your arrival, I now indeed believe that it sincerely does for our heavenly father cannot be heartless, as he instilled us with hearts of love, trust, faith, compassion and joy! .....

......Time tickles in joy and passes with a melancholic song. The hollow cry of penetrable sounds from the wild beasts underneath the moonlight alerts me of your hopeful
presence...and I am waiting..."

(extracted from: Stars Fall Down)



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Ever since I first started to write my first poem and article, I've loved to write. I continue to learn to write. In doing so, I let my feelings, thoughts, and emotions run wild and let people know what I intend to say, what I want to say. For me, writing is a creative expression to express what we never can say by speaking... Your readings and feedback are always important to me. Therefore, I wish that you'd write to me. My email address: pratik.rimal@hotmail.com Cell: +977-98511-42610

Sunday, July 13, 2008

Only Chance

The sound of tranquility overwhelms the grief that had cast its aroma has now gone with deemed voice of joy. The sounds of the prophets and those of the saints rhymes spreading ephemeral notes of seductive words. Should I stay perplexed in awe or look for a solution? I stay disillusioned because I still fail to know what to do next for I fear the only chance that might change the course of the sea; leaving me stranded amidst the vast water body. Should I profess my illusionary existence or search my own identity?

The air of disillusionment fills my surrounding. I stay startled nights and days looking for a solution, yet fearing the only chance that could stir the sea direction and make me wander at an aimless direction. Would the existence come as an illusion? Would it end like the subtle wind that goes unnoticed apart from the wind itself?

The answer finally comes to me as one early morning sun rose behind the mountains and shone upon my face. The early radiant light communicates to me…what’s gone is gone, and what awaits in the future…let it wait…let it come. Important is the present. So I strive to be who I am and live the present. And if my present existence bids farewell to my illusionary existence, so be it. After all, no man can be contemptible and live forever.

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